Now, don't get me wrong. The poem as originally written is HORRIBLE. Extraneous words, bad placement, etc. But it gave me the opportunity to edit and rewrite, which is something I need a lot of practice doing.
So here it is.
The Dark
(c) Drew Nicholson 2012
The dark makes everyone beautiful
soft focus the crags of age into the gently rolling hills of earlier years
clouds of eyelashes scud gently across your seafoam gaze
The dark makes everyone younger
brushing good full dirt into the cracks of accountability
encasing the resonant memories
The dark makes everyone quiet
enveloping sound with silence, deafening even those who do not hear
but listen, there! crickets hop across the meadow, I can tell
The dark makes everyone real
hands soft and gentle as I brush through the weight of tears
exposing everything masked by the light
The dark makes everyone open
the only place where you completely relax
no fear of the dark for you or I.
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